Chilling

Tranquility

 

A sky splashed salmon swims from sight
into the blackish sea
where past sunsets of pastels bright
evaporate as dreams

If subways scream from canyons home
or Springsteen breaks a string
in palm tree shadow all my lone
tranquility will breathe
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19 thoughts on “Tranquility

  1. Shawna says:

    I love A sky splashed salmon. It makes my heart happy. (You are missing a tiny e at the end of the word breath, by the way.)

    Mmmm, this is also a delightful line: evaporate as dreams.

  2. very cool….If subways scream from canyons home
    or Springsteen breaks a string….love that you have springsteen in it…and i know you’re a guitar player…makes it even more real…nice henry

  3. I like the idea of Springsteen’s string breaking and still being cool about it! I also enjoyed your ability to draw that picture of Caribbean relaxation and drift, drawn in such splendid colors and serenity.

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