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A Simple Love Poem

A simple love poem

roses full-grown

petals

red

redder

reddest

storm blown

scattered on tiled ground

seemingly alone

temporarily loosed

from love’s

poem

 

simple

 

yet

 

from roses

full-grown

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6 thoughts on “A Simple Love Poem

    • Yes, I did change colors. Went from shades of love to intensities. I thought maybe diff colors might represent diffferent loves. Thanks for the comment, and u r right the complexities and nuance is the garden of love.

  1. smiles…i like this much…through out the storm and its ultimate scattering, perhaps on being released from love, i wonder does it feel full grown or as shivering as an infant…

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