So many shades of blue that breathe between swift sky and sea;
between her eyes and me.
Too many shards of glass whose scream reflect split life and dream;
reflect my lie and she.
Miles of road and miles of road cross rivers and mountains and forests alone.
Winds of cold and winds of cold cause shivers and weakness and sadness of bone.
Self-banished. Self-exiled. Worn shoes. Torn sleeves. Dead end.
An ocean, Pacific, taunts, splashes tears back in my face. I cannot run. There is no more road. There is no more road. The road ends here. I collapse on the beach and
reach.
So many waves of blue that breathe between her eyes and peace;
between my cries and peace.
So many waves
of blue
that breathe.
So many waves
of truth
I breathe,
and breathe,
and breathe.
Miles of road and miles of road crossed rivers and mountains and forests
atoned.
I can live with me now.
The road starts here.
For dVerse Open Mic Tuesday.
i feel the blues throughout, but also the realeasing as your pace quickens and realizing you can live beyond them as well and the road starts here…
I can identify with the ‘sadness of bone’ 🙂
It feels like a sharp intake of breath held too long and then slowly let out
It seems as if the writer realises he made mistakes and has lost the person he loved but has learned from that mistake and that loss. Very lovely imagery even though it is such a sad subject.
Your poem moves nicely n swiftly like liquid! I love this the verses/stanzas.
The iterations sing the verses, like waves of loss and longing resolving into a deeper ocean of possibility and liberation.
Blues piling on blues – eyes that haunt, and cry with loss. It’s all here – poignant and sad, but ending on new beginnings.
I really like the way you play with rhythms here, from the long-short interplay at the beginning, to the rhythmic flow of the second half.
nice…i like the change of pace here…another piece of you that reminded me strongly of a song…
I specially like the opening lines, then the different shades of blue, to new beginnings ~ As usual, your background picture complements your piece ~
Enjoyed the visit ~
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Different shades of blue in many aspects of life. I like the crescendo building up and then tapering off giving a lingering effect! Great write Henry!
I’am glad the road starts a again. This poem at it’s own continuous flows of waves and emotions that could be felt as I read.
The colors in this are vivid & the pace is lively. Something about the ocean takes us all on a spiritual journey.
lovely Henry! beautiful color and texture – such a calming quality – soothes – Lib
Long weathered journey ending in atonement…