My Darkness

I scream your death
Shattered by sharpened steel
Sliced lifeless by silent bruised breath
My love

Disappears slow
Swallowed whole and complete
Discarded with wind’s nothingness

My love


17 thoughts on “My Darkness

  1. well done on the personification here..makes the struggle even more palpable and i like the contrast as well between love and darkness…for me it can be read in two ways and always hope that love wins ya know…smiles

  2. ha…very nice….great use of alliteration in this to give it a bit of a dance…nice intensity in that first one as well…lots of action….the feeling, well not so much…smiles.

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